Post by tech on Jun 6, 2012 9:36:56 GMT -5
this is page 1 of a book i started writing yesterday... tel me what you think!
Chapter 1
A strange sight
Two cats raced neck and neck through the desert. Their thick fur made it even hotter, and the sand was scorching the bottoms of their paws. But they ran on. If anyone was around they would have stared curiously at them. Such a strange sight they were. One's fur was so silver it was blue, with darker markings and striking ice blue eyes. The other was much more heavily built, with black fur and red strange markings. His eyes were a bright shocking red.
They continued on like this for most of the day, until their bodies had finally had enough and they collapsed from exhaustion in the middle of the fiery sand. The silver one looked over.
"Heat….. How much farther…. Until we get…. To…. the next town" he panted out. Heat glanced at him for a moment then sighed.
"a…about two…and a half more miles" he said, his voice dry and gritty. Heat drug himself up. The other cat tried to do the same but collapsed.
"heat…. Im sorry I got us into….this mess…." The silver cat said, his eyelids slowly closing. Heat got angry, fast.
"god damn it frost! You're not gonna die!!! " at that Heat picked Frost up by the scruff and ran. His body screamed for him to stop but he knew they would both die without water. And the compass in his head told him exactly where to go. Frosts smaller body kept tripping Heat as he ran, but he was determined. After all, that was his talent, being able to push beyond what others are usually capable of.
Eventually the blistering hot day turned into a frigid night. Heat finally had to set Frost down and take a break. Just as he was about to lay down for a minute he heard the soft sound of paws walking through sand. He jumped up and whipped around to where the noise was coming from…. But it started coming from everywhere.
He soon saw that coyotes had surrounded them, on all sides the dogs began growling and stepping closer and closer. Quickly Heat picked up Frost again and ran at the coyote blocking his way to the town. He scratched at its nose and jumped over its back and ran as fast as his feet would carry him. They were about a half a mile away now. They just need to get inside the gates. He could imagine a warm home they could sneak into and drink as much water as they wanted and curl up in the warmth. Just as he was in his daydream, a coyote bit his tail. He screamed in pain and dropped Frost, tripping over him he rolled on his back. The coyote stood over top of him, Heat kicked him in the gut as hard as he could. The coyote flew back howling in pain. Heat ran up to Frost to make sure he's ok, and he was off again.
frostbite-
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heatstroke-
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I also have an rp- noroi-cursedhearts.proboards.com
Chapter 1
A strange sight
Two cats raced neck and neck through the desert. Their thick fur made it even hotter, and the sand was scorching the bottoms of their paws. But they ran on. If anyone was around they would have stared curiously at them. Such a strange sight they were. One's fur was so silver it was blue, with darker markings and striking ice blue eyes. The other was much more heavily built, with black fur and red strange markings. His eyes were a bright shocking red.
They continued on like this for most of the day, until their bodies had finally had enough and they collapsed from exhaustion in the middle of the fiery sand. The silver one looked over.
"Heat….. How much farther…. Until we get…. To…. the next town" he panted out. Heat glanced at him for a moment then sighed.
"a…about two…and a half more miles" he said, his voice dry and gritty. Heat drug himself up. The other cat tried to do the same but collapsed.
"heat…. Im sorry I got us into….this mess…." The silver cat said, his eyelids slowly closing. Heat got angry, fast.
"god damn it frost! You're not gonna die!!! " at that Heat picked Frost up by the scruff and ran. His body screamed for him to stop but he knew they would both die without water. And the compass in his head told him exactly where to go. Frosts smaller body kept tripping Heat as he ran, but he was determined. After all, that was his talent, being able to push beyond what others are usually capable of.
Eventually the blistering hot day turned into a frigid night. Heat finally had to set Frost down and take a break. Just as he was about to lay down for a minute he heard the soft sound of paws walking through sand. He jumped up and whipped around to where the noise was coming from…. But it started coming from everywhere.
He soon saw that coyotes had surrounded them, on all sides the dogs began growling and stepping closer and closer. Quickly Heat picked up Frost again and ran at the coyote blocking his way to the town. He scratched at its nose and jumped over its back and ran as fast as his feet would carry him. They were about a half a mile away now. They just need to get inside the gates. He could imagine a warm home they could sneak into and drink as much water as they wanted and curl up in the warmth. Just as he was in his daydream, a coyote bit his tail. He screamed in pain and dropped Frost, tripping over him he rolled on his back. The coyote stood over top of him, Heat kicked him in the gut as hard as he could. The coyote flew back howling in pain. Heat ran up to Frost to make sure he's ok, and he was off again.
frostbite-
ashartist.deviantart.com/#/d52hw4r
heatstroke-
ashartist.deviantart.com/#/d52hwb4
I also have an rp- noroi-cursedhearts.proboards.com
